The Team.

[Darius]

Umbreon - defensive wall
Special - non yo biz =) just know its kewl.
Special - Maybe a Mewtwo
Glacian/Glacion whatever lol -Defensive wall
Blastoise - secret weapon of omfg wtf what that attack lol
Emporian thing the penguin thing..lol - and finally straight up attack of dewm.

Im not giving details but think of the combinations that could be done.

sorry im tired..

Umbreon
Mewtwo
(unknown yet)
Blastoise
Penguin dude the last form
Glacion thing.

[orgo muvinky]

well you It does not look like you have good type coverage >.>
but if you can make it work do your best ^^

[ShroomAttack]

Uhh, you won't be able to use this team unless your in an Uber battle.

[Neon Rider]

Ok, as you have 1 uber pokemon on your team (that being mewtwo), that means you have no choice but to battle in the uber tier.  and as the rest of your team are not uber and are fairly low tiered, you will get creamed in battle xD

[Darius]

Im an old school player im not worried about types..Im worried about kickin your rear the right way..Come on man Mewtwo + Icebeam = Frozen death lol...remember in pokemon red? anyway these pokemon defend against more.

[Darius]

My pokemon would get creamed? lol maybe..just maybe..

[ShroomAttack]

http://www.pokemonplatinum.net/forum/index.php?topic=18889.0

Try posting your team like that. ^^^^^^^^^

[Darius]

Alright gimmie a moment.

[-Drama Llama-]

This team is not possible, and would fail in multiple aspects of partisan.

First off, using Mewtwo, you would be forced to fight in the Uber Bracket ( Since he is an Uber )

Second, both of your walls are weak the Fighting, along with your Penguin.

Third, Sucker Punch from a Life Orb Honchkrow will knock out Mewtwo instantly, and then proceed to KO your entire team with Superpower.

Sorry. ><;

[Darius]

Lol. There are more than uber ways to battle pokemon. When I get it running we will talk. and if i had to take mewtwo from the team I got a couple more thing i could add..=) dont make me bring a magikarp!

[-Drama Llama-]

Lol. There are more than uber ways to battle pokemon. When I get it running we will talk. and if i had to take mewtwo from the team I got a couple more thing i could add..=) dont make me bring a magikarp!

But, using Mewtwo will force you to battle in the uber tier.

[Pride]

One Mewtwo < Uber team with more than one Uber

[Neon Rider]

One Mewtwo < Uber team with more than one Uber

exactly xD


this guy is gonna get pwned faster than a possum on the highway during a traffic jam while wearing an "you didn't see me" outfit

[orgo muvinky]

yall chill on the newbie and show him watcha mean

[sakashi]

If you want to use your team, find some other pokemon as your special unless you want an uber team. *shurgs* Alakazam or gengar? To replace your psychic. Unless get someone who specializes in SP atk.

[Aidan, Teh Linguistic Ninja]

wow.If you're going for the uber bracket, at least put a Kyogre in there,as its the strongest legendary there is. BESIDES Darkrai.And make sure it at least knows Thunder...

[jpl12345]

I am kinda new and I would like some people to critique my team for the ou bracket.

Forretress (Lum Berry)
252 HP/144 Defence/112 Sp Defence
Toxic Spikes
Stealth Rock
Rapid Spin
Rest

Ninjask (Leftovers)
176 HP/252 Attack/80 Speed
Swords Dance
Substitute
Baton Pass
X-Scissor

Blissey;Natural Cure (Leftovers)
252 Defence/40 Special attack/216 Sp Defence
Ice Beam
Aromatherapy
Softboiled
Thunder Wave

Gliscor;Sand Veil (Yache Berry)
252 HP/40 Attack/216 Speed
Earthquake
Roost
Stone Edge
Baton Pass

Infernape (Muscle Band)
4 HP/252 Attack/252 Speed
Close Combat
Flare Blitz
Thunderpunch
Stone Edge

Empoleon (Life Orb)
12 HP/12 Defence/252 Sp Attack/232 Speed
Surf
Ice Beam
Grass Knot
Roar

[Awesome Magikarp]

I am kinda new and I would like some people to critique my team for the ou bracket.

Forretress (Lum Berry)
252 HP/144 Defence/112 Sp Defence
Toxic Spikes
Stealth Rock
Rapid Spin
Rest

Ninjask (Leftovers)
176 HP/252 Attack/80 Speed
Swords Dance
Substitute
Baton Pass
X-Scissor

Blissey;Natural Cure (Leftovers)
252 Defence/40 Special attack/216 Sp Defence
Ice Beam
Aromatherapy
Softboiled
Thunder Wave

Gliscor;Sand Veil (Yache Berry)
252 HP/40 Attack/216 Speed
Earthquake
Roost
Stone Edge
Baton Pass

Infernape (Muscle Band)
4 HP/252 Attack/252 Speed
Close Combat
Flare Blitz
Thunderpunch
Stone Edge

Empoleon (Life Orb)
12 HP/12 Defence/252 Sp Attack/232 Speed
Surf
Ice Beam
Grass Knot
Roar

wrong place to post spammer
anyway consider changing infernape to a physically based mixape, change rest on forrteress to explosion as most pokes just switch in on forretress anyway and it's just a rapid spinner and you need a counter to lucario after it sets up a SD btw

[Ninja Kirby]

I am kinda new and I would like some people to critique my team for the ou bracket.

Forretress (Lum Berry)
252 HP/144 Defence/112 Sp Defence
Toxic Spikes
Stealth Rock
Rapid Spin
Rest

Ninjask (Leftovers)
176 HP/252 Attack/80 Speed
Swords Dance
Substitute
Baton Pass
X-Scissor

Blissey;Natural Cure (Leftovers)
252 Defence/40 Special attack/216 Sp Defence
Ice Beam
Aromatherapy
Softboiled
Thunder Wave

Gliscor;Sand Veil (Yache Berry)
252 HP/40 Attack/216 Speed
Earthquake
Roost
Stone Edge
Baton Pass

Infernape (Muscle Band)
4 HP/252 Attack/252 Speed
Close Combat
Flare Blitz
Thunderpunch
Stone Edge

Empoleon (Life Orb)
12 HP/12 Defence/252 Sp Attack/232 Speed
Surf
Ice Beam
Grass Knot
Roar

that team is allright but don't post your team in other peoples topics its spamming,make your own topic for it

[Jiraiya The Toad Sage]

spare him guys he's new here plus it looks like he knows what he's doing